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HUOZHEDEYU，WUSHENGDEHAI，YIQIEDOUGENSUIQIBENXINGZAIFAZHANZHE，YIQIEDOUZAIHEIANZHONGYANGAIZHEGUANGMANG。

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“YEXUYANQIANCHONGMANGEZHONGGOUQIE，DANXUEXI，SHIWEILESHIHEYUANFANG。”

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“YEXUYANQIANCHONGMANGEZHONGGOUQIE，DANXUEXI，SHIWEILESHIHEYUANFANG。”

HUOZHEDEYU，WUSHENGDEHAIA!

SHIDEGUANGMANGYOURUCHIREDEDENGTA，WEIWEILIANGQI，RANGHEIYEZHONGHANGXINGDEWOMENXUNZHAODAOTINGKAODEBIAN，HUIDAOYUANBENSHUYUWOMENDEGUTU。

HAIBIANXIANGQI“WUWU……”DEMINGDISHENG。

YUANFANGDELU，YEHAIZAIJIXU。

老师点评：

“《诗》可以兴，可以观，可以群，可以怨。”这是孔子对诗歌价值的高度概括。

小作者览书颇丰，有着深刻的阅读体验。由阅读而汲取的营养又反过来哺育着她的心灵，促其成长，给其力量，又为其孕育远方。无人青春不迷茫，于诗文中求索便是捷径。

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